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Post by vinnie123 on Dec 5, 2009 22:42:16 GMT -4
Name:Vincenzo Giordano Nickname:Vinnie Gender:Male Age:17 Year:3 Sexual Orientation:Straight Relationship Status:single Religious Beliefs:Christian Appearance/Wardrobe:Brown hair and Brown eyes. Olive skin. Jeans, White t-shirt with a leather jacket over it Personality: Funny, Kinda quiet at first, Friendly, Sarcastic, Can be cocky, Completely Oblivious History: Moved from Italy to America at 15 when my dad got a job in Chicago. Has one 5 year old sister named Isabelle nicknamed Issy. Strengths/Talents/Skills:Speaks Fluent Italian, Can play the guitar, Plays soccer Weaknesses:oblivous, has a bit of a temper Other:Italian
Rp Example: Vinnie woke to the buzzing of his alarm. He slowly sits up, his eyes half closed, and lets out a yawn. Standing up he walks over to his dresser and changes into a swim suit before grabbing a towel and walking down the stairs to the olympic pool. He dives into the water and swims back and forth feeling as the water rushes past him as he slices through the water. After about 10 minutes he swims over to the ledge and lifts himself out letting the water rain down his body as he heads over to his towel to dry off and head back up to his room to change into some clothes before class starts.
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Post by River on Dec 5, 2009 22:50:17 GMT -4
Not bad. You need a last name for your character, for one. Try to expand it a little. Add to the Appearance/Personality/History. What color is his hair? Eyes? What are his parents like? Does he have any siblings? Also, you need a Role Play example before I can accept him. Take a look at the example profile, if you need ideas. Otherwise, great start!
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Post by River on Dec 5, 2009 22:59:00 GMT -4
Much better. Still need an RP example though. If you need help feel free to post in the cbox.
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Post by vinnie123 on Dec 5, 2009 23:06:32 GMT -4
haha yea i hadnt noticed the appearance part at first
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Post by River on Dec 5, 2009 23:11:30 GMT -4
In the future all the RP's here are in 3rd person, okay? But good job! Accepted! I'll let you know what room he'll be in when I figure it out.
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Post by rue on Dec 6, 2009 17:40:40 GMT -4
omg vinnie! you joined too! haha you should read my profile... typical.
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